Achilles

Character Name

Kiritar

Player

Eren

More Info

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Basics

Date of Birth

15 May 2011

Gender

Male

Heritage

Birth place

Areas

Species

Coyote/Wolf Hybrid

50% Canis latrans (Coyote)
50% Canis lupus (Wolf)

Subspecies

50% Northeastern Coyote
50% Eastern Timber Wolf

Luperci

Ortus

Current

Mate Characters
Pack Super Awesome
Rank Omega

Previous

Mates Characters
Packs (Mon YYYY - Mon YYYY)
Omicron, Phi, Beta, Delta

Table of Contents (hide)

  1.   1.  Appearance
    1.   1.1  Build and Species
    2.   1.2  Coloration
    3.   1.3  Forms
    4.   1.4  Other
  2.   2.  Personality
    1.   2.1  Demeanor
    2.   2.2  Ideals
  3.   3.  Interaction
  4.   4.  Relationships
    1.   4.1  Key Relations
    2.   4.2  Family: Families, Families, and Families
    3.   4.3  Minor Relations
    4.   4.4  Former Relations
    5.   4.5  Residence
    6.   4.6  NPCs
    7.   4.7  Abilities
    8.   4.8  Inventory
  5.   5.  Achievements
  6.   6.  History
    1.   6.1  Timeline
    2.   6.2  Threads

1.  Appearance

His thick fur, smooth to the touch however not slick against his body, seemingly sticking out in all directions, covers up the slim build underneath, he wasn't built to be a powerhouse but he's not to be underestimated, not that many would due to the illusion of largeness that his fur gives. In a fight, this might give him an advantage as one might not expect him to be built for speed instead of hard hitting. He's neither tall nor short, average height would be best to describe him.

1.1  Build and Species

His face mainly resembles that of a coyote, after his mother, but his build and fluffy fur, those traits lean towards his wolfish blood. It's not hard to guess that he is a true mix, there's nothing really muddled or confusing about him.

1.2  Coloration

Go go name that color!

  • Optime Hair: Brown Derby (#4E2418), highlighted with Red Robin (#783421)
  • Eyes: Trinidad (#E33908).
  • Fur:
    • Primarily Bull Shot (#785021).
    • Lighter Cape Paliser (#9E7747) on underside.
    • Brown Derby (#4E2418) and Red Robin (#783421) scattered and ticked throughout coat

1.3  Forms

Lupus

Secui

Optime

100 lbs (45 kg)
32 in (82 cm)

200 lbs (91 kg)
40 in (102 cm)

220 lbs (100 kg)
6ft 5in (193 cm)

His fur makes him appear larger the most in this form. Pretty intimidating but not the scariest thing around. He definitely wouldn't be mistaken for a bear anytime soon.

The most muscular form. His fur smoothens out a little but still appears fluffy.

Fur appears the thinnest and smoothest in this form, not as smooth as most others though. Mane isn't styled, only thing to note is that on the back of his neck where it starts it seems to spike up in a natural messy manner.

1.4  Other

Modifications

  • Piercings: None.
  • Tattoos: None, but probably soon in the future.
  • Scars:
    • None.

Accessories

None.

Clothes

  • You can delete this section (or add more/different sections) as necessary -- if your wears outfits or wears clothes only for a special occasion, you might describe it here.

2.  Personality

Though generally inexperienced and young at heart, potential resides inside the soul of this individual. Achilles appears to have two settings, there is the most common - the extrovert, where his eyes will be full of curiosity and innocence. He may become uncooperative or rebellious if he finds it in his best interest, he is not loyal - at least not in the more business oriented sense. His bravery can become a very useful tool, but can also bring him into danger easily coupled with his rashness. Then, there is the other, the more quieter side of him, where his eyes seem to darken, like so many others - this side will only come out when threatened or stressed.

His sense of justice is a violent thing. He has no time for gray, only seeing straight lines, black and white, things like murder and stealing are justifiable when an eye for an eye is applied. Bad things should happen to bad people. That is his idea of justice. As such, his defense mechanisms are extreme. But perhaps, with the right guidance, one can teach him to hold back and not stoop to this level. Emotionally he finds it difficult to open up for a reason unknown to him, something holds him back from expressing how he feels in an uncontrollable fear of rejection and hurt, Achilles hates this about himself.

Potential is the word for him.

2.1  Demeanor

A few bullet points, quirks, and other information might go here.

2.2  Ideals

Interests

  • Likes: Learning, being praised or encouraged, other animals
  • Dislikes: Careless or lazy people, murderers, rapists

Traits

Rash, determined, hardworking, dramatic

  • Outlook: Optimistic, believes good things happen to good people and bad things happen to bad people.
  • Expression: Extroverted, depends on the other person but is generally submissive to those that he believes stronger than him.
  • Alignment: Chaotic Good

Fears

  • Failure, mockery, powerlessness

Motivations

  • Power, control, progeny

Biases

  • Packs: Nope, he knows next to nothing of any pack at the moment.
  • Species: None.
  • Non-Luperci: Has never met a non-Luperci, would probably be shocked by them or treat them as if another animal.
  • Gender: Tends to stick to gender roles because he doesn't really know any better, ex: will assume women to be kinder, men to be meaner, etc.
  • Color: Wary around wolves with 'evil' appearances (black pelts, red eyes).
  • Sexuality: None, he doesn't even know his own, how can he judge others?
  • Age: None.

Sexuality

His mother taught him literally nothing. Has no clue about anything. Doesn't even think about sexual stuff at all. Will probably be completely oblivious to advances.

Spirituality

Describe your character's spirituality. What do they believe? Do they believe in (a) higher power(s)? Do they perform rituals? What do they believe after death? Do they have a creation myth? Maybe this section is long enough to require more space.

3.  Interaction

  • Speech: Boyish but not overly high-pitched, somewhat rough but not deep.
  • Scent: What does your character smell like?

4.  Relationships

4.1  Key Relations

  • Characters: Here is where you might describe especially important family members (e.g., if your character has a close, competitive relationship with a sibling, describe it here) or friendships or whatever else.

4.2  Family: Families, Families, and Families

  • Mother: Characters
  • Father: Characters
  • Siblings: Characters
  • Extended: Here is where you might describe their extended family, if necessary. This template is formatted to include only nuclear family -- why repeat all of a character's possible relations when it's a list of 100+ characters in some instances? :| Easier to link to family pages, says Sie.

4.3  Minor Relations

  • You might want to just keep a simple list of characters your character has encountered, or you might want to describe them, or whatever.

4.4  Former Relations

  • Dead and inactive characters should go here.

4.5  Residence

  • Describe their residence here.

4.6  NPCs

Name

  • Species:
  • Age and DOB:
  • Description:
  • Personality:

Note: you can find a template for all your NPCs here. For brevity's sake, this larger template only includes basic information regarding NPCs.

4.7  Abilities

Strengths

  • Reading/Writing (Journeyman): He is, naturally, about the same level with both - he knows the basics but doesn't know big words and he isn't very poetic - prefers to be simple and straightforward when writing.

Weaknesses

  • Character is prone to weakness. Describe the weakness here -- how does it affect your character? How bad is it?

4.8  Inventory

Trade

Describe your character's trading here -- are they open for lots of trade? Where can others seek them out to trade? Are there any "caveats" about trading with your character (e.g., is your character a slimeball looking to screw everyone over -- HI ERIS)?

  • Offering: Things your character can offer.
  • Accepting: Things your character wants.

Items

Category of Things

  • Your character has a thing.
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Category of Things

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5.  Achievements

Pack Game

Go get your Pack Game template and put it here; else delete this section.

Catacombs

Go get your Catacombs and put it here; else delete this section.

6.  History

Brief (1-3 paragraphs, sparsely detailed) overview of character history. Sie likes to repeat this section in the character's forum profile, since it's the shortest and easiest to parse for someone just browsin' over the forum profile.

6.1  Timeline

YYYY

  • Month: This section is most useful for detailing what happened before your character came to 'Souls, since that is not included in the lower thread archive section. Some players choose to continue their timeline history with important events from the thread archive while other players are content to use this section solely as a "before 'Souls" section.

6.2  Threads

YYYY

  1. [M] (NPC) [1] (DD Mon)
    AREA, with CHARACTER. Example of mature thread where your character was an NPC.
  2. (NPC) [2] (DD Mon)
    AREA, with CHARACTER. Example of thread where your character was an NPC.
  3. [3] (DD Mon)
    AREA, with CHARACTER. Example of regular thread.

YYYY

  1. [4] (DD Mon)
    AREA, with CHARACTER. Example of how to re-start numbering following section break.

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